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Chrissie's avatar

Prompt vent 4

Scent

Breathing in and transported back .

Walking in the evening with no expectations . In a country faraway after a day of sun and swimming . How could anything else compete ? Nostrils twitching I forget about the temping signs for souvalakia . Suddenly mesmerised by the sweet wafting delicate aroma . Gosh , it’s so lovely . Where is it coming from , I thought to myself. An invisible force pleasuring me . Having to take care walking along a road without a pavement, I am mystified that the fragrance becomes more intense . Suddenly I realise why , tiny little flowers are holding court in a shrub quietly at the edge of a small yard . Just being and so delightful . Now there is a reason for that evening stroll or to sit outside and savour . That beautiful gentle musk calls pollinators while we can be further enchanted in floral charm .

A lovely memory

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Jane's avatar

#promptvent #day4 SCENT

Breathing deeply

as I step through the door

of my childhood home,

I am surrounded by the scent

of my mother's laundry,

reminding me of love

through daily care.

And even though

that home's no longer there,

I only have to close my eyes and breathe,

and my memory does the rest.

But what strikes me now,

is that my daughter too,

comes home and breathes,

just as I did,

inhaling so much more

than the aroma of my washing,

by crossing the threshold of home.

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